CoolCatDaddio's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[A cat]

you should work on steadier lines, thickness and weight

DetectiveDiabeetus responds:

Considering this was a 2 minute drawing made on my computer that wasn't originally for newgrounds and was not made to be representative of my drawing capacity I think you should look a little bit at some of my other stuff before telling me what to work on.

Also, not that I don't appreciate the constructive criticism, but I don't really understand it. Why make steadier lines with a creature like this, who is mostly curves? Do you mean make thicker lines or thinner lines? And I have no idea what you mean by weight.

[Sollux]

the form looks good, its too scratchy though

I'd also suggest finding a new way to watermark your art than just using deviant art

Contortion responds:

Took your advice and carried it onto my next piece! c: thanks for the suggestions.

[Hey Parappa, you wanna hit a blunt?]

noice m8
it looks great, the lines could be a little better on some places and the thickness could be more consistent
the faces too look good

[rain]

really like your use of line thickness
that goes for the line art and use of colors as well

the background it neato burrito too

mogy64 responds:

thanks! i tried to focus on the line weight more this time!

[Neon]

I like the colors
the gradient shading and the shirt look weird though

[Project ashe -Landidzu-]

I honestly think you are tracing just becuase of the way your line looks and the way you shade on both your pieces. the shading and the jaggyness of your lines look like something a beginner would do

of course I dont have proof, but one of these days someone will recognize the pose or proportions and then call you out with actual evidence
so keep that in mind

[Dawn Time]

the proportions look off and she is so stiff
the line art too, there is a lack of flow

[cake]

I like the colors, background and line thickness
I think you missed some white outlines though

mogy64 responds:

thanks! and thanks for the heads up about that too! id have never noticed it haha

[night session]

great color choices

[Good Morning]

the thing that stands out to me is the hair, it looks so flat
everything else looks good

FuShark responds:

Yeh, I see what you mean. Thanks for the input. :D