CoolCatDaddio's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mucky and Pooto]

wow, who does this fucking rat think he is?

[Daisy (RE-DRAW)]

I think some of the main things you need to work on are color choices and the outlines

for example the hair has really light outlines compared to the other parts of her body
and because of it her glasses sort of pop out which I think was unintentional

as for the color choices the girl looks really washed out and drab
my guess is you took Mirai's color scheme and lowered the saturation to match the dark background.
what I think you should have done was edited the colors to have a more blue'r hue
or something to blend better with the background
I conjured this up on photoshop to give a better example of what I mean
https://i.imgur.com/AnKpYjW.png
(btw feel free to let me know if you want the imgur image taken down)

I hope this helps

GenesisKun02 responds:

Thank you for the feedback, to be quite honest I always wanted to receive constructive comments (I rarely get that from DeviantArt).

I colored her in her normal color scheme at first, then just put in a blue multiply layer above everything, this is one of the first times I've tried to incorporate environment lighting to my drawing (I usually do a plain/white background). Also I tried to mimic the way the anime outlines her hair, and tried to lighten the other outlines using dark gray. And also the colors may have been effected when I changed the resolution of the image (I mistakenly worked on a smaller resolution than I wanted, changed in finalizing the piece), I decided to keep it that way because it gave it a "misty"/"blurry" effect. Here's the link to the original resolution version "https://i.imgur.com/sUkIfGk.png", if that helps.

And your edit is beautiful dude! I'll try in the future to actually do that.

[Spiderking]

Im digging the use of black

[Cory Vs Trump Arc Fanart]

good job
I didnt laugh all the way, but I did exhale

BigBoxs responds:

Aww. only halfway. I'll try twice as hard next time then. haha.

[Nature was Here]

I think the way you shade is too soft
I think you need to define things more when you shade

[Djimmi The Great]

I agree with the user below me, something is kinda off
I wonder if Its the line thickness being too small in some parts...

Its still a good piece

[Okomure]

I like it and I personally wouldn't mind more art like tbh

though I do hope you go back and make more minimal/simple stuff like "Hexagons" and "Suspect"
every now and then

PaulsInfinity responds:

Of course, but even with lewd pieces I still try to make it as artistic as I can, rather then just boring tits and ass

[Sanakan]

oooh
I like the polygonal shading this one has

mogy64 responds:

thank you! i thought itd be an interesting way to shade metal

[I will hold your light till the end...]

wow thats actually pretty cool
good job

IsaYuki responds:

Oh! Thank you for that, WIP still but I have sort of feelings it is good as it is :)

[GOOGLE : Gods Among Us]

really cool dude, the fidget spinner is a nice touch lmao

AtharvaPande responds:

Thank you