Check out this short story I made for the Newgrounds Halloween Writing Contest

I didnt win of course, but its the first short story I made in awhile and pretty happy to just have finally written something in such a long time.

However...

I didnt get any feedback at all D:

(The host of the contest mistook someone else's story for mine in the feedback section LOL)

so if anyone cares to read, feel free to let me know what you think. Im writing another short story with some of my spare time at work and at home and hopefully its good enough to post as well.

CYA!!!!