CoolCatDaddio's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pop-Art Chaplin]

I dont think this would make a good t-shirt
for one thing, chaplin looks like you just used illustrator to just auto-make the man's shapes and features without editing most of it
illustrators image trace almost always never look's good

aside from that, it has a weird balance with chap on the right there, not really suited for a shirt

[A cat]

you should work on steadier lines, thickness and weight

DetectiveDiabeetus responds:

Considering this was a 2 minute drawing made on my computer that wasn't originally for newgrounds and was not made to be representative of my drawing capacity I think you should look a little bit at some of my other stuff before telling me what to work on.

Also, not that I don't appreciate the constructive criticism, but I don't really understand it. Why make steadier lines with a creature like this, who is mostly curves? Do you mean make thicker lines or thinner lines? And I have no idea what you mean by weight.

[Sollux]

the form looks good, its too scratchy though

I'd also suggest finding a new way to watermark your art than just using deviant art

Contortion responds:

Took your advice and carried it onto my next piece! c: thanks for the suggestions.

[rain]

really like your use of line thickness
that goes for the line art and use of colors as well

the background it neato burrito too

mogy64 responds:

thanks! i tried to focus on the line weight more this time!

[Neon]

I like the colors
the gradient shading and the shirt look weird though

[Dawn Time]

the proportions look off and she is so stiff
the line art too, there is a lack of flow

[cake]

I like the colors, background and line thickness
I think you missed some white outlines though

mogy64 responds:

thanks! and thanks for the heads up about that too! id have never noticed it haha