groovy
color choices and line art are pretty tight
groovy
color choices and line art are pretty tight
I dont think this would make a good t-shirt
for one thing, chaplin looks like you just used illustrator to just auto-make the man's shapes and features without editing most of it
illustrators image trace almost always never look's good
aside from that, it has a weird balance with chap on the right there, not really suited for a shirt
you should work on steadier lines, thickness and weight
Considering this was a 2 minute drawing made on my computer that wasn't originally for newgrounds and was not made to be representative of my drawing capacity I think you should look a little bit at some of my other stuff before telling me what to work on.
Also, not that I don't appreciate the constructive criticism, but I don't really understand it. Why make steadier lines with a creature like this, who is mostly curves? Do you mean make thicker lines or thinner lines? And I have no idea what you mean by weight.
the form looks good, its too scratchy though
I'd also suggest finding a new way to watermark your art than just using deviant art
Took your advice and carried it onto my next piece! c: thanks for the suggestions.
really like your use of line thickness
that goes for the line art and use of colors as well
the background it neato burrito too
thanks! i tried to focus on the line weight more this time!
I like the colors
the gradient shading and the shirt look weird though
the proportions look off and she is so stiff
the line art too, there is a lack of flow
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Maurice's School of the Disa-
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