you should work on steadier lines, thickness and weight
you should work on steadier lines, thickness and weight
Considering this was a 2 minute drawing made on my computer that wasn't originally for newgrounds and was not made to be representative of my drawing capacity I think you should look a little bit at some of my other stuff before telling me what to work on.
Also, not that I don't appreciate the constructive criticism, but I don't really understand it. Why make steadier lines with a creature like this, who is mostly curves? Do you mean make thicker lines or thinner lines? And I have no idea what you mean by weight.
the form looks good, its too scratchy though
I'd also suggest finding a new way to watermark your art than just using deviant art
Took your advice and carried it onto my next piece! c: thanks for the suggestions.
really like your use of line thickness
that goes for the line art and use of colors as well
the background it neato burrito too
thanks! i tried to focus on the line weight more this time!
I like the colors, background and line thickness
I think you missed some white outlines though
thanks! and thanks for the heads up about that too! id have never noticed it haha
the thing that stands out to me is the hair, it looks so flat
everything else looks good
Yeh, I see what you mean. Thanks for the input. :D
she looks fine, I dont like the shading however
might be the color choices, but I really dont like how soft everything looks
Hey, thanks for the feedback! I need to work on my shading in a way that looks sharper
im digging this, the style is very appealing
thank you!
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