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[Game Grumps Animated - 9 Ball Island]

The artstyle is pretty bad color wise, expression wise.
the famliy guy-esque eye shapes dont give alot of expression to the character, all the work is done by the eyebrows and eyelids and they dont get the job done alone. Try to do a better job at drawing eye shapes and change them up with different expressions.
Some figure practice or any drawing practice in general will help you out a bunch, your line work is awful looking at the head shapes, the stiffness on the hair , perspective on the the table , and other various shapes lack any refinement. So just draw alot and try to improve
As for the color choices: they dont work together. Your choices are sometimes too saturated. I think the over saturation is the biggest problem, but im not 100% on color theory stuff, regardless you should study some of Ego's color choices when it came to backgrounds and such.
The character animations are kinda stiff, try giving them some frames to slow down before they come to a complete stop
I think you deserve some praise on Dan's hand movements at 0:25. They were a nice touch
anyway, hope you improve

JimToons responds:

Thanks for being constructive. I wish I had the time to make everything better but at least I know where to improve. Thanks!

[The future of Xbox!]

great shit man, digging the expressions and the effort into the animations

Ex-Poser responds:

Thanks, I like the new technique of key pointing each pose instead of traditionally drawing each individual frame. It takes a lot less time to animate and looks a lot smoother.
Glad someone likes it! Cheers BonemanCharles!

[Twisted Tales: Yellow]

surreal

MonicaIvan responds:

Thank you :)

[Lightbulb]

So like I said on the other forum, dont make scenes shorter than a second, the beginning scene with the console is disorienting

give the sword some weight by not making it stop spontaneously, give it some frames to slowdown and stop smoothly

put in more effort on effects like the afterimage and the bulbs breaking

I know you said you got lazy and whatever, but put in the effort, you wont regret it when people compliment the effort you put out it

I do like however the bulb gasping when he begs for mercy, gave it a nice touch

pastalips responds:

Thank you for the advice!