lux's voice stop randomly at 0:34
also her voice at ooohhhhhh at 0:35 is midly annoying to me, its also kinda weird, I think the voice actor should have tried another take at it
lux's voice stop randomly at 0:34
also her voice at ooohhhhhh at 0:35 is midly annoying to me, its also kinda weird, I think the voice actor should have tried another take at it
I like the animations, I dont like however are the sound effects and music uses sometimes
for example the music when the girl turned into a vampire sounded awful
Its hard to put into words what it is that I dont like, so sorry for not going into more detail or giving more examples
Thanks for feedback! And yeah, this was one of the first attempts to make sfx for a cartoon, so there was little experience on this matter.
Still, Im glad you liked the animation! :) Stay tuned for more!
Glad you took our advice ( or passive aggressive suggestions) on the text
but its still not good, outro is too long.
the mouth movements aren't good either. when talking the top of the mouths dont move in real life, only the jaw, although "once" looked alright; I think the mouth movements would look better if you kept what I said in mind,
The lips sync is awful, try studying how to make it look better.
start with better mouth shapes and verity.
also its pretty short
You should work on the running cycle, I think you could have done a better job
and as the other guy pointed out, they should have had different running cycles, it started to stand out around the 4th runner that they were all same
agreed, thanks for the feedback.
Intro and the round 1 is too long for a stick fight like this keep it down to 3 seconds tops
watch some stick fight and learn from them, this is sub par
here is my inspiration for good stick fights: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8FxOiL6i_S8
Its too short, it might get BLAMMED for being a pointless teaser
a teaser should have more substance than this, I really have no idea what you are going to do or the quality thats going to come with this
ok. Thanks!
my favorite part about this lip sync test is how the text blocks the mouth from view
You should really take a lot of time to practice drawing
Try using a website called quickposes to practice figure and anatomy
I'd like to see some actual animations instead of key frames, dude
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